Like silkened waters
Rippling across small pebbles
Not without sharp edges...
You’ve arrived!
And I am unleashed and unfettered!
I have longed for the Sun
Though not as I have longed
For YOU!
What next…
© Calli 2009
Image source: Rapunzel by Araantonak on deviantart
Note: yes, apparently I’ve made up a word!
6 comments:
you are in
a place of greatness
and all of your Arts reflect that!
beautiful things
are coming to you.
What next, indeed! I can only imagine... :-)
I love the passion in your poems!
Reminds me of those gush of intense feelings that one gets when love is new.
oooooh, heavenly....
Well Calli -grin! One word did it for me: "Unfettered!" Coming in at close second: "Unleashed!"
Were there other words in this blog?
Have you thought about maybe changing the end to:
'though not as much as I have longed for you!'
Just a thought, you. Take or trash.
Lovely words whatever.
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